Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Road traitoring

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Road traitoring[edit]

--Private Gert5 UGotM10:14, 13 June 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 5 I found it somewhat hard to understand what road traitoring was, which somewhat spoilt the entire article for me.
Concept: 8 If you can explain Road Traitoring better, and add a bit more stuff, I think this article can go places.
Prose and formatting: 8 Proper capitalization of titles is a must! I corrected the capitalization of several titles.
Images: 8 I think you probably could add funnier pictures and clean up the caption on the Hitler picture, but I found the 2nd picture extremly funny.
Miscellaneous: 7 I didn't get a few of the things in the article, such as the last sentence in the Crazed Idiot section
Final Score: 36 I found it somewhat hard to absorb, so please try to spread out the information a bit over a large page by adding more details and less main ideas. I'll help you write this article if you want me to.
Reviewer: --Maharaja Hdgcfcf | Icons-flag-in.png | User Page | Talk | Go Kill Yourself 17:48, 13 June 2007 (UTC)