This is the first article I ever made. I think it's good, and it's been up for awhile, so I decided to submit it to Pee Review. On top of a review, I'd like some ideas for some categories. --Crazee Boy
| Humour:
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8
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Funny! Nice work. Less quotes at the start please. I didn't really get the mimes stuff. The red head picture is only vaguely relevent. The ' The Theory Involving Whoopee' comes across a little random.
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| Concept:
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7
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Not a concept I'd ever try...but you made it work.
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| Prose and formatting:
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8
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Good prose. No complaints.
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| Images:
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8
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Good error message...and random fat guy gif.
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| Miscellaneous:
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9
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A nice article, but I don't know why Jesus loves it.
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| Final Score:
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40
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Sorry, I know less about categories than you do.
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| Reviewer:
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MaxMangel 14:16, 11 June 2007 (UTC)
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