Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Psychopath
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Psychopath[edit]
It's black in its humor, but it is a rather dark subject anyway. Any comments on length? What to add? Phrank Psinatra 18:53, August 30, 2011 (UTC)
| Humour: | 7 | It does seem pretty humorous, but it also seems sad. Just because it's a dark subject doesn't mean you has to be a gloomy article...perhaps you could try something different? |
| Concept: | 10 | I enjoy the concept, and I find it very original. I can say that much. |
| Prose and formatting: | 3 | Most of the articles I've seen don't look like this, it resembles a list...I think you should probably make it look more other Uncyclopedia articles. Also I don't remember seeing any links, wouldn't want to trap somebody, now would you? |
| Images: | 0 | For the simple reason that there are not images in the article. If it helps any, I added some for you. |
| Miscellaneous: | 7 | How I feel about the article. |
| Final Score: | 27 | So far so good! Pay attention to my suggestions and keep working on it! |
| Reviewer: | Ilovecheeseandsausage | |
This article is by now hopefully fixed, and I have followed as many things as I could. Lightening it up was difficult, due to the subject matter. Too bad Ilovecheeseandsausage no longer appears to exist or I would thank him for his assistance.