This article really sucked before, so I rewrote it. Now it only marginally sucks. I could use an opinion, so I can ignore it. Thanks! --THE 20:58, 13 February 2008 (UTC)
| Humour:
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8
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I chuckled silently to myself a few times. It's a very subtle, satirical humor, which is nice. I don't expect anyone to actually laugh at this one.
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| Concept:
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8
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"I only buy this magazine for the articles." I'm not sure if you were aiming for that joke, but it seems like it. Well done. I think it needs more jokes about how the philosophical issues involved are not appropriate for children under 18.
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| Prose and formatting:
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9
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Elegant, in a way similar to the prose in the magazine.
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| Images:
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6
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Needs more in this area.
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| Miscellaneous:
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7.8
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The images/text ratio is a little heavy on the text size. There should at least be an image at the top to open up the article.
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| Final Score:
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38.8
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Good concept, subtle humor, needs some work on the images.
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| Reviewer:
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 Kaizer the Bjorn takkun  (nya nya) (1961 model!) Check out T61! 18:54, 17 February 2008 (UTC)
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(nya nya) (1961 model!) Check out T61! 18:54, 17 February 2008 (UTC)