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Make Money Fast

It sorta failed VFH so I need a second opinon, Anyone? --User:The Improver/sig19:32, Apr 25 2008 (UTC)

Humour:	5.5	I didn't really ever laugh out loud at this, and the only time I came close was when the article contradicted itself. "It could be your name on this certificate", but the certificate clearly uses the almost-getting-overused-and-cliched-{{username}} template. Hey! My name IS on the certificate, article! And Richie McRich? Sounds a little too Casper the Friendly Ghost to me.
Concept:	2	This is basically all of the SPAM I've ever seen added up, subtract the words "penis" and "v14Gr4" and multiplied...with SAVINGS! No, uh, wait. It IS all the SPAM I've ever seen. It's not an encyclopedia article. At all.
Prose and formatting:	3	Definitely one of the worst encyclopedia articles I've ever read. What? It wasn't intended to be an encyclopedia entry? Then why is it here; it's just SPAM, and maybe only just barely satire on SPAM, but I'm sure that there is something on this site that accomplishes the satirical aspect better than this. I'm also not a big fan of the censor and strikeouts everywhere; using them in an article is one thing, overusing them in an article is another thing, but overusing them in spam is another "another thing."
Images:	6	Other than the SPAM KING himself, the images were nothing really special. I do have to admit that the certificate actually looked pretty good on my 'puter, and I think I'm going to get it printed off to hang on the wall, since it does already have my name on it.
Miscellaneous:	5	Was going to be an average, but I raised it to help your self-esteem. Although telling you that probably didn't help.
Final Score:	21.5	I don't think this should be candidate for VFH in its current state, especially if it's already failed once. If it were to be written as a more encyclopedic article, then maybe just MAYBE it has a chance.
Reviewer:	Spillin DylanTALKEDITS00:55, April 28 2008