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Lindsay[edit]
Bringer 06:35, 5 April 2008 (UTC)
Humour: | 7 | There are plenty of funny jokes but nothing "hilarious". Work on placing 1 or 2 "knee-slapping" incredibly funny jokes and you'll be on your way. |
Concept: | 9 | Excellent concept. |
Prose and formatting: | 6 | Nothing absolutely dreadful though you should move the picture of Shatner to the left side of the page. |
Images: | 3 | Sorry, but 2 images won't do it. The building barely counts and the picture of Shatner, though fitting as it is, does not add much humour. |
Miscellaneous: | 7 | Nothing really. |
Final Score: | 32 | Good concept, funny jokes, but nothing hilarious. Good start though. Add some nice pictures and fix up the pictures a bit and you'll be there. |
Reviewer: | --MeatLoafFan 23:06, 5 April 2008 (UTC) |