Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Le Mans 24 Hour Race
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Le Mans 24 Hour Race[edit]
Pman 01:45, October 9, 2010 (UTC)
- I call it just to review something. Will work on it soon. --Wilytank can be a pain in the ass. 21:32, November 28, 2010 (UTC)
| Humour: | 6.5 | There's a few good bits, but it's a little over the top on what you're talking about (see concept). |
| Concept: | 7.5 | Instead of race cars, there's shopping carts. I like some of the ideas here but I'm not totally sure where the ideas of "Fry-re" for Ferrari or "Mercy-dees" for Mercedes ties into shopping carts. Sometime's it's funnier to just use the official name. |
| Prose and formatting: | 5.5 | Several short paragraphs about the history which could use a little more content. A few red links are present too. Please remove them. |
| Images: | 5 | You have one image. It fits the article and made me giggle a little bit but it needs some siblings. |
| Miscellaneous: | 6.1 | averaged |
| Final Score: | 30.6 | It's a meh article. It's not delete worthy, but it's not really great. You really need to just add content to it. Longer paragraphs and some more images are needed most. |
| Reviewer: | --Wilytank can be a pain in the ass. 21:15, November 30, 2010 (UTC) | |