Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Kyle MacLachlan
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Kyle MacLachlan[edit]
Make sense of what you can. Matfen 11:03, May 22, 2010 (UTC)
| Humour: | 8 | This article is funny in a sort of subtle, restrained way. It doesn't hit you over the head with the joke, which I like; that said, if somebody doesn't know anything about Twin Peaks they're going to be lost as hell. |
| Concept: | 10 | The concept is great. I wish I had thought of it. |
| Prose and formatting: | 9 | Stays in character the entire time, and it doesn't drop out to do a cheap joke. |
| Images: | 6 | Is there such a thing as too many images? Yes. Yes, there is. The jokes in some of the captions fall flat and the article would benefit from a few images being plucked. |
| Miscellaneous: | 7 | It's good, but it could be a bit shorter. Also, it needs minor grammatical cleanup, because I'm a fucking pedant, sorry. |
| Final Score: | 40 | Not bad. Certainly a clever concept. If the execution is a little tighter, this could be VFH material... if enough people get it. |
| Reviewer: | --SirIsaac 20:43, May 29, 2010 (UTC) | |