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J'accuse | Talk:UnMysteries:J'accuse[edit]
Fun little article. It's been reviewed recently, but I want more opinions. Remember that parts of this article are Randomly Generated, so take that into account. • <-> 01:25, 22 September 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 8 | Very funny. I liked it a lot, the main danger is incoherence. See endnotes. |
| Concept: | 7 | It's odd, I had expected -- given the title -- that the concept would involve Emile Zola and social consciousness. But it's a game of Clue/Cluedo. |
| Prose and formatting: | 8 | Well-written. |
| Images: | 9 | Very funny pictures. |
| Miscellaneous: | 8 | Good work, I hope it finds success. |
| Final Score: | 40 | |
| Reviewer: | ----OEJ 17:02, 23 September 2007 (UTC) | |
I think the main danger is that the narrator's style veers, every so slightly, toward stream-of-consciousness at times. This can be difficult for some readers to comprehend -- it can be confusing. I might counsel you to be as clear as you can in the writing. Good luck -- ----OEJ 17:02, 23 September 2007 (UTC)