Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Ingrate
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Ingrate[edit]
TPLN 22:13, 18 February 2009 (UTC)
| Humour: | 5 | The humor was decent, not that "ha ha" funny but still worth reading. The whole joke was a dad yelling and swearing a lot at his teenage son, and I guess this is making fun typical family arguments. Its was kind of funny the way the dad keeps shouting and losing control. It’s not that origanal, though. |
| Concept: | 6 | The concept was a bit of a cliché. The "lazy teenager" thing has been done many times before. There was a lot of swearing, and it seemed that the sentences where just fluffed up with them to keep readers interested. Again, using an excessive amount of bad words has been done a lot on this site. |
| Prose and formatting: | 8 | Asinine was spelled wrong, Microsoft word couldn’t fid any other spelling or grammar mistakes (to lazy to check if it missed anything) |
| Images: | 6 | The images aren’t really funny, but they help to show what’s happing. |
| Miscellaneous: | 6 | Averaged, rounded up because of good execution of the concept. |
| Final Score: | 31 | This is fairly entertaining, better than a bunch of the articles here. It really can't be improved that much. Go to my talk page if you want to |
| Reviewer: | --Snake7 01:57, 19 February 2009 (UTC) | |