Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/HowTo:Undo Drugs
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HowTo:Undo Drugs[edit]
--Sir General Minister G5 FIYC UPotM [Y] #21 F@H KUN 08:40, 11 June 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 5 | The humour is based off the article being written (deliberately?) as non-sensical gibberish. This can be funny, but possibly gets close to the line of 'don't be stupid.' |
| Concept: | 5 | The concept is tricky - how to write an article as if you're hyper-active without it becoming unreadable. I'd suggest making sure each micro-section of the article is funny, and then the article overall becomes funny. |
| Prose and formatting: | 6 | Uhh, well formatting is good, in the sense that you have sections and stuff. Prose is I guess part of the joke. |
| Images: | 4 | You need a funnier pictures. The stick guy doesn't cut it. |
| Miscellaneous: | 3 | Overall, the concept doesn't work yet. An easier to understand central theme to the gibberish, if you know what I mean, may help. |
| Final Score: | 23 | This was a difficult article to review... |
| Reviewer: | MaxMangel 13:46, 11 June 2007 (UTC) | |