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HowTo:Speak a Foreign Language [edit]

I Would like some feedback on this--CrabPope 17:13, 16 June 2007 (UTC) HowTo:Speak a Foreign Language

I may not have done this before but I'll give it a shot. If there is some type of "newbie guide" let me know. --Eiyuu Kou 00:10, 17 June 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 6 It is a little funny but someone else may think it is funnier. Nevertheless I just see it as something that can be added to to increase the amount of tastes.
Concept: 5 It seems a bit random. You may have put thought into the organization of the article but it could of gone farther.
Prose and formatting: 6 There is a lot of space and not enough text. Some of the the names of the people during the conversations could also be italicized just to make it more interesting.
Images: 4 I like the picture with the sword but it seems irrelevant. The previous picture, I did not get and was also irrelevant.
Miscellaneous: 7 The tip was funny. It is kind-of an inside joke, however because I do not know how many people know about classic Greek art, if it has anything to do with this.
Final Score: 28 Ultimately an article that could be improved on. A little organization, more pictures, and jokes could go a long way.
Reviewer: --Eiyuu Kou 00:10, 17 June 2007 (UTC)