I nommed this for FA but forgot to get a review first. Speed is more important than depth on this, as the actress said to the bishop. Pup
| Humour:
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8.5
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- Lolt.
- Could be a teeny bit better.
- More deadpan perhaps.
- Or more zany. One of those.
- Interchange those and the nom's in the bag.
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| Concept:
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9
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- Lolt.
- I've never actually changed a tire, but it seems... *shudders* labor-intensive.
- A howto. Perfect.
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| Prose and formatting:
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7
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- Deadpanning ridiculousness. Thumbs up.
- Sometimes the deadpanning got away from me and my eyes glazed over bits. Then I had to go back and read them.
- Not sure how to fix this ^ thing.
- Could you insert some whitespace as a buffer between images and text?
- It's OK but could use some fixing.
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| Images:
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6
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- It has images.
- None are funny.
- No captions.
- GET SOME CAPTIONS
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| Miscellaneous:
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7.6
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| Final Score:
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38.1
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- I lolt. Not just at this pee request, either.
- GET FUNNIER NUB.
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| Reviewer:
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• • • Necropaxx (T) {~} Friday, 17:22, Jan 29 2010
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