Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/HowTo:Be A Man (resub)
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HowTo:Be A Man[edit]
Something I whipped up in a few hours, even though it's fairly long. Take a look, tell me what you think... -- • <-> 13:28, 25 September 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 6 | Not as funny as J'accuse. I found that I did not laugh out loud at all during this one, thought I did think to myself, quietly, at the back of my head, "hmmm, that's funny". |
| Concept: | 6 | This concept is not quite as funny as J'accusse. It's hard when you've made a good article because people are expecting you to raise the bar all the time, which can be excrutiatingly difficult at times. Keep trying though! |
| Prose and formatting: | 7 | A few red links, but nothing too serious. |
| Images: | 9 | Unlike J'accuse, these pictures are actually really good because you've made them work without the article. I like the Pokemon reference in there. Well, I don't LIKE it, I just find that extremely random, which I'm starting to like. Your style of writing is incredibly sophisticated and original; I love it! |
| Miscellaneous: | 10 | Things that made me laugh: the bit about purchasing getting a firearm. You know what they say about men with big guns, don't you? ("What," you say. "That they cause a lot of destruction and kill a lot of people?") Uh, yeah. |
| Final Score: | 38 | Look, it's not funny enough... it is, however, a good try, with some good concepts. I know that it's a HowTo, but at the begginning of the page, why say "HELLO, LADIES"? Is this supposed to be a transexual joke? Seriously, I'm confused. |
| Reviewer: | --Andy the Idiot 02:47, 26 September 2007 (UTC) | |
GOOD TRY! It's getting better!