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Fourth Wall[edit]
Hopefully this doesn't suck. Maybe it does. That's what you're here for, though. It would help to know what the fourth wall is. - P.M., WotM, & GUN, Sir Led Balloon 
(Tick Tock) (Contribs) 00:31, Mar 26
| Humour: | 8 | Very funny throughout, not quite laugh out loud funny for me. |
| Concept: | 8 | Great concept, well executed. If I have any criticism it is that in the beginning of the article you say that I broke the 4th wall, and then later you are begging for me to break it and let you out. Maybe a slight mistake, maybe I'm confused. |
| Prose and formatting: | 8 | Good spelling, usage, and punctuation. The contents look a little strange with no sub-sections. |
| Images: | 10 | Perfect use of relevant images. |
| Miscellaneous: | 8.5 | Great job. |
| Final Score: | 42.5 | To improve the article further, I would add a couple subsections and at least a few more links towards the end so that the paragraphs don't look bland. |
| Reviewer: | --Brainspew 13:48, 26 March 2008 (UTC) | |