Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Final Halo Fallout XIII

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Final Halo Fallout XIII[edit]

Humour: 8.5 What you have is really quite funny. Now add more of that funny.
Concept: 7 Kind of a ridiculous concept, but OK.
Prose and formatting: 8 Not a lot of room to make mistakes, I think there was one or two though. I might just fix 'em myself.
Images: 0 Get Images. NOW! You could try requesting one at UN:PIC, or just look for someone who does any potatoshopping there and ask them for an image on their talk page.
Miscellaneous: 5 WAYWAYWAYWAY too short.
Final Score: 28.5 What you have is great!! There just needs to be more of it. I recommend expansion. As always, read UN:HTBFANJS for ideas, check out some of the upper echelon articles on VFH(also 4 ideas), and avoid humor that is totally random at all costs!!! For in that way lies madness...... good luck!
Reviewer: P.M., WotM, & GUN, Sir Led Balloon Baloon.gif(Tick Tock) (Contribs) 22:49, 7 June 2007 (UTC)


I've removed the quotes. Remember that a whole bunch of quotes at the top of the page does not automatically make an article funny. --General Insineratehymn 23:56, 11 June 2007 (UTC)