Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Can I be an admin please?
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Can I be an admin please?[edit]
| Humour: | 7.5 | The jokes, while very funny, don't have much variety.The big, bold text at the end doesn't help, either.Personally, it should get some "spring cleaning".HTBFANJS could help this ina big way! |
| Concept: | 8.5 | The concept is a fresh restart of that annoying, old question.Very well done, but shouldn't be so straight-forward. |
| Prose and formatting: | 5 | I'm sorry,but it's horrible in some places.Mostly it's ok, but that big,BOLD text at the end is immature and unfunny.Some red links, ok, but paragraph layout looks like a grue attacked it.ALSO, spelling errors are frequent!As for the voice, it speaks for itself. |
| Images: | 7 | First, the "admin medication" box image is worth some big lulz.The other image is ok, too.It just might need a couple more.Not mmuch more to say, really. |
| Miscellaneous: | 7 | Pretty average score, if not a little low. |
| Final Score: | 35 | The whole page is pretty funny, honestly, but it really needs some work.Maybe a rewrite would be helpful. |
| Reviewer: | --Bad Shroom 18:29, 19 April 2009 (UTC) | |