Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Aztec

Aztec

Elevator from Ipanema 03:35, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

This is my first review and I hope it is satisfactory! Cool I Get A Signature 17:55, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Humour:	6	I thought it was funny at the start and I would have enjoyed it more if there had been some variation in it as to the end it was becoming stale and predictable. At times there was to much information and not enough humour. None of the jokes really stood out from other articles I have seen. Your spanish part really dragged out the page and it could have very funny if you just cut it down for instance the bit about them coming back for the gold was very funny but it was in amongst too much fact. Nobody likes a stub but nobody likes wikipedia. The smaller sections at the end about calendars and sport were quite amusing and besides from the start were the highlight of the page.
Concept:	7	The concept is good if i wrote the article this is nearly how I would have thought about going through it. To improve it i would mabye add a section about daily life of the aztecs or food something just to take it away from the predicatable mindless violence. Also I would have done it more in the style of a bad documentary but that is purely my preferance
Prose and formatting:	7	I did not notice very many grammatical mistakes although considering my record at this sort of thing I wouldn't ask me! If you are not sure if you can proofread or you are too lazy ask the dedicated proofreaders to do it and add {{Proofread}} on the page. The Formatting was good as well although again this is not my area of expertise. As always more experienced people are being forced are happy to help you with formatting and HTML Coding
Images:	9	Those images are great and used to a high comedic value I want to plug that later one for one of my articles. Captionig could improve slightly and the link on one of the pictures is missing.
Miscellaneous:	7	I enjoyed reading this article and therefore decided to let you know in a box.
Final Score:	36	Please put a section on my talk page if you need anything else from me. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this article.
Reviewer:	Cool I Get A Signature 17:55, November 20, 2011 (UTC)