Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Ark of the Covenant
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Ark of the Covenant[edit]
Fresh out of the oven, it's a steamroll of an inferior work. I'm attempting VFH material here.-- 23:02, 2 January 2009 (UTC)
| Humour: | 5 | There are some golden lines in this article, and some entertaining cracks at the old testament. However, a lot of the text sounds too factual. The introduction up 'till the bit about "Moses & Sons" sounds like a Wikipedia article. Simply put, it's not silly enough. Funniest section would have to be "don't mess with the box", "what's really in the box?" is a little weak. |
| Concept: | 8 | The concept is original and has the potential to be very funny. |
| Prose and formatting: | 9 | Nothing wrong with the format, it all sounds very encyclopedia-like. Only I'm not sure why the first letter of every paragraph is in bold? |
| Images: | 7 | The images are good quality, if a bit small, and the captions merit a snort of laughter. |
| Miscellaneous: | 7 | A fairly average article, with the potential to make it to featured if you work hard. |
| Final Score: | 36 | Like I said, smooth out the teething problems, and it'll do really well. Good luck. |
| Reviewer: | Sanareth 18:01, 5 January 2009 (UTC) | |