Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/A Victorian Gentleman's Guide to the Trivialities of Courtship
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Please, If you have any constructive critisism, tips or insults I would appreciate you expressing them to me, through the medium of language.--CrabPope 23:22, 17 March 2009 (UTC)
A Victorian Gentleman's Guide to the Trivialities of Courtship[edit]
CrabPope 23:22, 17 March 2009 (UTC)
- Flyby Try to cut down on the white space and add links. Also, I would suggest more images, the last one is sorta random. As for the language, it sounds close enough to me, but I speak Northern Appalachian. I'd suggest getting the opinion of a real English person (preferably an educated one) on the language, people tend to pickier about that which they are familiar with. --Mnb'z 05:19, 19 March 2009 (UTC)
I am a real English person! And I am (poorly) educated. The dialog is sort of meant to be incongruous to the setting, hence the references to Directory Enquiries, Films, High Fives, Marijuana etc.--CrabPope 10:02, 19 March 2009 (UTC)
| Humour: | 1 | shit |
| Concept: | 1 | shit |
| Prose and formatting: | 1 | shit |
| Images: | 1 | shit |
| Miscellaneous: | 1 | shit |
| Final Score: | 5 | I hate this article, HATE HATE HAT |
| Reviewer: | --CrabPope 12:29, 20 March 2009 (UTC) | |