UnScripts talk:Superman's first adventure

In response to your comment on my talk page: I really like the pictures you used. That last one is especially well captioned. They're also well sized. Good job on the pictures. I also like all the other things that you fixed up since I reviewed it. I really like this article, but if you want to VFH it I would recommend spending a little more time on it just to make sure more people find it funny too. Good job overall though. (talk) 19:04, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

This line puzzles me: (Clark approaches the morgue of a local newspaper.) Newspapers don't normally contain morgues so what does this mean? --RomArtus*Imperator ® (Orate) 18:43, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

I lifted it from the comic. Must have meant something in the '30s. --120.56.175.188 14:52, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

I see it failed on the VFH. Best thing is to do is to keep on a shelf and come back to it Scofield. I can also say Filial Piety if you think it will never have a chance. --RomArtus*Imperator ® (Orate) 18:03, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Format

So I tried to turn this into a script form, but in regards to the formatting, you should probably go over and try to make the formatting more consistent - sentences ending with periods, and not putting sentences in parens (I mostly just search/replaced on the thing) - blocks are for general directions, whereas parens are for character-specific, that kind of thing. And say what the scenes are, please; it'll make it look and transition a lot better. 1234 ~ 01:42, 18 May 2011