UnNews talk:Noob Gets PWNED

Quick notes from your coach

1. You have a problem in this article regarding the picture alignment, that is giving a large blank are in the middle of the article. Align the second picture to the left of put it bellow in the text. More coming when you finish this. -- herr doktor needsAraygun  [scream!] 01:14, 24 April 2007 (UTC)
2. You really better use journalistic language. UnNews articles don't use sections, quotes and goofy slangs as "n00b". Use "freshmen", "novices" or even "newbies", something more formal.
3. You better expand this. In its current state, it can receive the ICU tag at any moment. If that happens, don't panic. You have one week to finish this. -- herr doktor needsAraygun  [scream!] 01:36, 24 April 2007 (UTC)

• Ack! This is on the main page now (i did it in concurrence w/ Help:How to write an UnNews article) should I have? The alignment is fixed, btw, but I didnt see anything myself.Leatherboundbooks 01:25, 24 April 2007 (UTC)

I don't get you. I've saw you placed it in RecentUnNews, but it should appear just in the UnNews main page, as a simple link. But you better had this finished this before placing it there. -- herr doktor needsAraygun  [scream!] 01:36, 24 April 2007 (UTC)

ah disregard. didnt notice the revisions to what you said before. im gonna take it off the recent page in this case. Leatherboundbooks 01:55, 24 April 2007 (UTC)

Hands to the job, kiddo. It's a healthy habit to spend a little more time with your new articles. -- herr doktor needsAraygun  [scream!] 01:55, 24 April 2007 (UTC)

How exactly do you use references? Leatherboundbooks 02:16, 24 April 2007 (UTC)

It works like this: This is the text<ref>This is the reference</ref>

At the end of the article, where you want the refs to show up, you will place this tag:

<references/>

It will work like this:

• This is the text

Expanded, more journalistic language, and sounds 4x as self-important. I imagine over the week I may have more to add to this. Do unnews articles have to be displayed for the day they are created? Leatherboundbooks 02:48, 24 April 2007 (UTC)

Notes

Poll: Would this add or take away from the article?
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LeatherboundbooksTalkContributions 03:14, 1 May 2007 (UTC)

The Ascii Art confuses me...

I'm bad with ascii art, I see an amorphous blob in a captain's hat... I think it might help the article, but my blindness is really very difficult to cope with in a situation like this, because im basically blindly saying "oh yes, thats a great picture," so if someone who can actually see the picture its supposed to be (or if someone can point it out) then please do so lol

From Pee Review

This makes fun of various things, from World of Warcraft, the Vietnam War, and the reactions to the Virginia Tech massacre. Leatherboundbooks 23:58, 27 April 2007 (UTC)

Humour:	9	Very Funny! Nice Job!
Concept:	8	A little early for the Virginia Tech references, but its not too early
Prose and formatting:	9	Well Written!
Images:	10	Perfection!
Miscellaneous:	9	Great Job!
Final Score:	45	Hilarious Article!
Reviewer:	Robertodole 09:50, 30 April 2007 (UTC)