UnNews talk:Birthday wish for world peace granted
I have to say, I'm technologically impaired. If someone could import the pictures that I just randomly stuck in, that would be good. If someone could replace the text on the below picture with "Everyone's Great," then I will worship you as a god. Thanks! --LLBean
From Pee Review[edit]
I'd like if I didn't just get a review, but also suggestions for improvement. Thanks! --LLBean
| Humour: | 8 | Pretty funny, if anything at all maybe some more satire on the subject of world peace, very good though. |
| Concept: | 7.5 | Pretty good concept, been done a few times before but still good |
| Prose and formatting: | 7 | Good timing, just work on formatting paragraphs and such |
| Images: | 8 | Original and thought out. A tiny bit of photoshop never hurt, but improvement not necessary. |
| Miscellaneous: | 9 | Good length, good effort, good outcome |
| Final Score: | 39.5 | Nice article |
| Reviewer: | TheLemonOfIchabod 20:53, 31 March 2007 (UTC) | |
Suggestions: You can get more ideas from making parodies of articles on various news sites, such as CNN.com. An OK example of this is: UnNews:Autobahn Minimum Speed Expected to Rise
From Pee Review 2[edit]
Not based on anything in the news, but I thought it was a fun idea. I think the pictures that aren't imported are a bit funky, but I don't know how to do anything with them, so some help there would be nice. Thanks! --LLBean
It's an excellent concept but you don't really follow it through in a news article kind of way. I'll edit it down a bit and make it more "UnNewsey" for you. If you don't like what I've done just revert it. --Kelpan 17:28, 6 April 2007 (UTC)