UnBooks talk:Lost Diary of John Walters
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I wrote this during my Year 9 English Comedy exam and have adapted it (quite badly) for Uncyclopedia. It got 100% in the exam (including an excellence in humour) and I hope I've done it justice. Having said that, I know it's nowhere near being feature-worthy, so any ideas, thoughts, reviews etc. are welcome to anybody with a better sense of humour than I do. {Ikabu}BUZZ...FLICK...GURGLE... 09:36, 1 June 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 6 | Not enough content to make me laugh...or is that the point? |
| Concept: | 8 | Genius idea. |
| Prose and formatting: | 5 | Eh,.... |
| Images: | 6 | Nothing stands out except that elephant cut out in the brick wall. |
| Miscellaneous: | 3 | John Walters...nuff said. |
| Final Score: | 28 | It's got something, but it's so short I never found myself laughing and it lacks clever content. |
| Reviewer: | --Dr. Fenwick 20:33, 1 June 2007 (UTC) | |