UnBooks talk:April Fools Cuisine
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Woops... Can someone please get this article into UnBooks cookbook thing?Guymandude 20:37, 12 May 2007 (UTC)
Nevermind :D i figured it out, but someone else beat me to it... thank you Strange But True and BraydieGuymandude 21:21, 13 May 2007 (UTC)
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UnBooks:April Fools Cuisine[edit]
This is a decent UnBook, but I still think it can use some tuning up, plus some really needed ideas and humour. Help? Please? --Guymandude 22:26, 23 May 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 7 | Some pretty good moments in here. The humor is rather violent and pshychotic, but that's what makes the article funny. Maybe you could put in some pranks that are even MORE absurd, i.e. serving someone a cake with a nuclear bomb inside, or serving someone a meal filled with some sort of horrible bacteria or threadworm or something. The preposterousness in this article is what makes it really funny, so the more rediculous the prank the funnier it will be, or at least in my opinion. |
| Concept: | 8 | There's a lot of stuff that could be done with this idea. |
| Prose and formatting: | 5 | There are several typos, but I fixed them. Also, it doesn't link to any other articles. You might want to add some linkses. |
| Images: | 6 | The two images you have are good. could use another one though. |
| Miscellaneous: | 8.7 | %%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%5 |
| Final Score: | 34.7 | It's a good start to an article. My major suggestion would be to make sure the new jokes you add are completely over the top, because that's where the humor in this article really comes from. |
| Reviewer: | --THE 20:59, 24 May 2007 (UTC) | |