Talk:Zeppelin
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Formerly a comment in the article[edit]
There's a very similar piece at 1900 on the timeline: I put it there, then decided that there was enough for a whole article. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by LLBean (talk • contribs)
From Pee Review[edit]
Yes, the only funny thing about zeppelins is that they are ridiculously dangerous. I'm trying to make this a "straight-man" piece, with the textbookish style supplying a dose of absurdity. Does it work? Thanks. --LLBean
| Humour: | 8 | Great pictures, funny jokes, not so sure about the kaiser birthday parties, definately a good work on the "straight man" part of it. |
| Concept: | 5 | Its just a hard topic you know? |
| Prose and formatting: | 8 | Formatting is sketchy at times, writing is good, maybe too long? |
| Images: | 10 | Those are the best, specially the first one, not so sure repetition works for the exploding flames deal |
| Miscellaneous: | 6 | Its one of those things were the procedure is pretty good but the idea is just not that juicy... |
| Final Score: | 37 | 7 |
| Reviewer: | --Spaniard 02:07, 8 March 2007 (UTC) | |