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Talk:Tortuga
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Pee Review[edit]
| Humour: | 8 | I love how all these facts are written from a Pirate's perspective. While a lack of information in any subsection would generally make me think that the article needs to be fleshed out, it makes perfect sense in the case of Education and Law Enforcement. Good job. |
| Concept: | 9 | Anything concerning Pirates is a good concept. ANYTHING. |
| Prose and formatting: | 5 | Surprisin'ly, I din' have any problems wit' yer use o' th' Pirate language. Tha' bein' said, ye could've done wit' a few less 'arrr's an' a few more commas. Thar were times when I would read 'arrr' in th' middle o' a sentence an' it served only t' throw me off course. Sim'larly, thar were many occasions o' 'arrr' where 'aye' may 'ave made better sense, methinks. Fin'ly, I also foun' tha' thar were sev'ral bits o' yer article where ye ought to 'ave used th' word 'were' in th' stead o' the word 'be.' We Pirates may soun' incomprehensible a' times, but we durn well know what tense t' speak in! |
| Images: | 7 | Tortuga's flag and location gave me a chuckle as well as the University of Tortuga. In general, the artcle seems well balanced, so I wouldn't necessarily add or remove any more images. |
| Miscellaneous: | 7.3 | Av-arr-age. I'm sorry, but it had to be done. |
| Final Score: | 36.3 | All in all, I enjoyed the article. If you can manage to clean up your prose and formatting, I'd like it even more. |
| Reviewer: | KneeChee27 15:41, 18 May 2008 (UTC) | |