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From Pee Review[edit]
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7.9513
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Though it's funny this articles a bit too relentlessly savage and negative. There needs to be a slightly more subtle build up to each Joke, as if a real fat person had written it and was inadvertantly revaling their insecurity, emptyness and pathetic greed.
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| Concept:
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7
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I like the idea, it just needs a little more expansion to fulfil it's potential.
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| Prose and formatting:
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6
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Well written just needs to be refined a little.
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| Images:
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5
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Needs a few more images maybe some examples of different types of obese people.
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| Miscellaneous:
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7
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No idea what this sections for.
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| Final Score:
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32.9513
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Overall it's a good start just needs a little more work and some slight expansion.
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| Reviewer:
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Winstanley1 13:53, 22 March 2007 (UTC)
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