Talk:The Battle of Chickens

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The Battle of Chickens[edit]

Hello. I came up with this idea... Chocobos VS Cuccos. I did some stuff, even made a Bayeux Tapestry image for it, but I'm running out of ideas. Any thoughts? so sayeth Sliferjam ~ Talk * Sock * Jam * Gallery * Fearless Fosdick? Jambow.gif 18:14, 26 July 2006 (UTC)

Alright, what I will say straight off here is that when you reference video games, you are running the risk of 'losing' readers without the required knowledge. Whilst the article is not too bad at this for the moment, it could perhaps begin to alienate people. For example, I don't really know what Square Enix is.

Anway, with that out of the way some more positive comments:

  • I like the image you Photoshopped. Perhaps consider moving this to the head of the page and making some more humorous images would help the article a lot. Perhaps make one showing the relative size of the chickens compared to normal chickens or humans, and working this into the article somehow. It might help get across the sheer size of these beasts.
  • Perhaps the chickens could eat each other or something, a kind of poultry cannibalism. That could be funny.
  • Oh, perhaps Chocobos should taste like chocolate... -- Hindleyite | PL | GUN | WOTM | Image Review - Use it | Converse 14:25, 29 July 2006 (UTC)