Talk:Pen Island

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The Man Of Led 22:13, 9 April 2007 (UTC)

From Pee Review

This is only my second article, and also my second entry to the Pee Review, so please have mercy take no prisoners!!

Humour:	5	It's the kind of humor that I like in moderated doses, but is not appreciated by many uncyclopedians. A bit random and a bit pubescent.
Concept:	7	It is a little off in left-field, but it was a good pun.
Prose and formatting:	5	Pretty solid. The templates could be better, there could also be some charts about Pen Island.
Images:	7	The images were a little sloopy, but they flowed about right.
Miscellaneous:	5
Final Score:	29	Pretty good for a second article. B-.
Reviewer:	Happy Weasel 21:29, 22 April 2007 (UTC)

From Pee Review 2

Pen Island

Reviewed here once, improved it, what hits and what misses? Methinks "writing and stuff" needs....improvement?

Humour:	9	Very well executed!
Concept:	4	pfrt. I was surprised someone hadn't done it already.
Prose and formatting:	8	Well written... a lil too much PENIS
Images:	7	I really like that pen/sword one. Others are consistent
Miscellaneous:	6.5	Oscar Wilde section got a mild laugh
Final Score:	34.5	Worthy of praise!
Reviewer:	--MrMetalFLower 17:42, 15 May 2007 (UTC)