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Talk:Mists of time
This is my first ever article. What do you think? Krazyhades 04:22, 2 May 2007 (UTC)
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Mists of time[edit]
This is my first full article on Uncyclopedia, though I've added a bit to a couple others before (often without being signed in). I wanted to know what people think of it, and what I can do do improve my style and the inherent humor of the page.
--Krazyhades 20:16, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
For some reason the linky in the title isn't working. Perhaps it has something to do with the casing of the second char (the i in the title. The artice can be found by following [this link]. -- di Mario 13:14, 11 May 2007 (UTC)
- I fixed the link. The t was supposed to be lower cased --THE 13:00, 12 May 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 8 | Congrats! Douglas Adams would be proud. However, in order to score a 10, you need to add a bit more. |
| Concept: | 9 | Good concept. |
| Prose and formatting: | 10 | Extremely sophisticated. Vocabulary is great (made up words seem real) and there are no grammatical errors as far as I can see. |
| Images: | 0 | Lets the side down a bit. I understand that it's hard to get images for something like this, but maybe try and put in images of what it's not. (You mentioned it was not Donald Trump.) |
| Miscellaneous: | 10 | Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy 2. |
| Final Score: | 37 | Only two things stand between this and glory - its shortness and its lack of images. |
| Reviewer: | {Ikabu}BUZZ...FLICK...GURGLE... 06:33, 19 May 2007 (UTC) | |