Talk:Homing pigeon
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Nice rewrite Braydie, hope it works well.--
22:12, 24 February 2007 (UTC)
- Hehe, thanks. I just need a add a bit more content and wikilink. Maybe another picture. —Braydie 22:13, 24 February 2007 (UTC)
From Pee Review[edit]
Uhh.. Yeah, I'm kinda stuck on what else I can add, and how far I've got to go. —Braydie 07:46, 8 March 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 7.5 | I like it |
| Concept: | 7 | Certainly onto something |
| Prose and formatting: | 6 | Nothing wrong here |
| Images: | 7 | Top two images are good, you could maybe add another larger one. |
| Miscellaneous: | 6.814562 | Your score on the Hemp-Zoodlebagger scale of Miscellaneosity |
| Final Score: | 34.314562 | A good article. I like the mix of humour with the terrorism reference introduced well. I don't know if the article is inspired by Worms (PC game) but it was the first thing I thought of when I read it so you could make more of this if you want to expand the article. Maybe a screen shot of a homing pigeon in action (if you don't have the game you could get one off the web I'm sure) or a reference to sheep/cows/concrete donkeys would work. |
| Reviewer: | --Kelpan 23:22, 4 April 2007 (UTC) | |
- Hey, i made a page for the exact same thing after looking on the requests page. It said one had'nt been made since you hav'nt capatalised the p, so i donated my bits to you.Jollybaron 20:51, February 19, 2010 (UTC)