Talk:David Attenborough
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Tell me what you think jack s 08:31, 28 August 2006 (UTC)
- It's ok. I like it. I know who he is, and like it. You need to sign your post with ~~~~. I don't know who wrote this.-- Sir Severian
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02:04, 28 August 2006 (UTC)
- It's funny; the problem is that the excess comma-thing has been done in the William Shatner article. But I know you have to get his pauses across. Maybe semi-colons?--Procopius 02:59, 28 August 2006 (UTC)
- Yeah, I can see what you mean, but I think his style stands alone. Whereas, Shatnerwould, speaklikethis, and then.... leavebigpauses - David, Attenbrough, tends, to, pause, and then even, emphasise, particular, words. jack s 08:32, 28 August 2006 (UTC)
- It's funny; the problem is that the excess comma-thing has been done in the William Shatner article. But I know you have to get his pauses across. Maybe semi-colons?--Procopius 02:59, 28 August 2006 (UTC)
