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Barnegat[edit]
This is my first article, so I am looking for some constructive feedback to improve it. I am also looking for some suggestions and/or examples of what type of images to use for the article.
Thanks! John
| Humour: | 6.9 | Good, I smiled and chuckled a couple times |
| Concept: | 6 | ? |
| Prose and formatting: | 6 | Nothing outstanding, work on this a bit |
| Images: | 5 | No images, get some please. Try some pictures of the undead or zombies, that would be pretty funny |
| Miscellaneous: | 5.1 | The article was a bit to long for it's own good. Shorten it a bit and add some more humour, as well as images |
| Final Score: | 29 | |
| Reviewer: | Spatz 18:44, 19 May 2007 (UTC) | |