HowTo talk:Escape Prison
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I'm not done yet - it's a pretty solid article, and I'm a bit stuck on ideas for improvement - your advice would be appreciated. While it ain't no feature yet, I think with a bit of work, it could survive VFH, what y'guys think?--Sir Manforman 21:31, 14 October 2007 (UTC)
Humour: | 8.675309 | Incredibly funny. Good job on the Holocaust reference by crossing out "Solution" and replacing it with "Suggestion". |
Concept: | 9.5 | When it comes to the style of delivery, I must admit that it has been done before. But still, there's a great deal of originality and a great voice to the article. |
Prose and formatting: | 9 | OK, so there's a few places where punctuation is missing, but beyond that, nothing really big. |
Images: | 10 | Interesting pictures. That judge looks strangely similar to my grandfather. |
Miscellaneous: | 10 | Nice citations, but you may want to consider placing the article in another category or two. |
Final Score: | 47.175309 | Looks VFH worthy to me. Mind if I nominate it? :D |
Reviewer: | --Hotadmin4u69 [TALK] 13:36, 15 October 2007 (UTC) |
Comment: I've tidied up the spelling a tad, hope no-one minds. Good article, BTW. --Sir Under User (Hi, How Are You?) VFH KUN 14:45, 15 October 2007 (UTC)