UnNews talk:Slow news day results in bizarre death
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UnNews:Slow news day results in bizarre death This one's my first actual article of any kind, but still, give it your worst! --Starnestommy (Talk • Contribs • FFS • WP) 01:39, 6 June 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 7 | The humour was alright. I think you could have told some history about the town and the paper. The quotes were good. You managed to make it sound like a real small newspaper-article. |
| Concept: | 7 | Yeah the concept was good, this is UnNews so naturally it's written like news. Good job. |
| Prose and formatting: | 7 | I didn't notice any spelling errors, you could have added some links to the article, though. |
| Images: | 7 | An image would have been nice. |
| Miscellaneous: | 7 | |
| Final Score: | 35 | You could still work on it a bit, so I give it 7 out of 10. |
| Reviewer: | Finntastic 10:18, 6 June 2007 (UTC) | |