UnNews talk:Sesame Street Elmo goes insane, threatens to murder toddler

Is this really featured? My inner Grammar-Nazi cringes at the thought, and tells me that the writing doesn't sound like a convincing news article so much as a dialogue. Sorry if my inner grammar-nazi is harsh, but you know, he's a nazi... Robertodole 05:30, 25 February 2008 (UTC)

Does your Inner Grammar Nazi know how to edit articles so they have better grammar in them? --Lt. Sir Orion Blastar (talk) 16:43, 25 February 2008 (UTC)

Mine does. The third paragraph could still use some detail to make it funnier though. --Raxvulpine 16:46, 25 February 2008 (UTC)

That's just horrible. I thought that the whole day in rehab had made Elmo calm down. Hopefully after he serves his sentence he'll pull himself together.

Too many pictures

It's not necessary to cram in every Elmo pic available. There first one is cute and appropriate. The other two seem gratuitous, with awkward, unfunny captions attempting to justify their presence.

I'd give the article text a read but something tells me it would hurt. / A hog staring at a wristwatch 01:59, 4 March 2008 (UTC)