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UnNews talk:Fed up fish fight ferociously
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From Pee Review[edit]
| Humour: | 4 | I'm sorry but I didn't find it very funny. The 'sex with fish' jokes were weak and overused. You need to insert some good lines. Try to vary it. A bestiality joke or two is alright but you need something else. I have no idea what that might be as I feel the idea is limiting. |
| Concept: | 5 | Like I said, the concept seems to have limited scope for humour. Perhaps if you could make it more ridiculous (perhaps like a war between the fish and the locals). |
| Prose and formatting: | 8 | No complaints. |
| Images: | 5 | Again, the sex with fish jokes were weak and overused (which is all the pics were). |
| Miscellaneous: | 6 | The title made me laugh. |
| Final Score: | 28 | To be honest, I think it needs a total reworking of the concept or some massive improvement of the current one. |
| Reviewer: | -- raging Ape (devour) (Riot Porn) 20:49, 31 July 2007 (UTC) | |