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From Pee Review[edit]
| Humour:
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4
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I'm sorry but I didn't find it very funny. The 'sex with fish' jokes were weak and overused. You need to insert some good lines. Try to vary it. A bestiality joke or two is alright but you need something else. I have no idea what that might be as I feel the idea is limiting.
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| Concept:
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5
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Like I said, the concept seems to have limited scope for humour. Perhaps if you could make it more ridiculous (perhaps like a war between the fish and the locals).
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| Prose and formatting:
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8
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No complaints.
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| Images:
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5
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Again, the sex with fish jokes were weak and overused (which is all the pics were).
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| Miscellaneous:
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6
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The title made me laugh.
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| Final Score:
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28
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To be honest, I think it needs a total reworking of the concept or some massive improvement of the current one.
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| Reviewer:
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-- spontaneous Ape (navigate) (Riot Porn) 20:49, 31 July 2007 (UTC)
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