Talk:XPod

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It has potential, but I can't think of anything! :-( --Jocke Pirat 01:30, 29 April 2006 (UTC)

Yep, this is looking OK so far, but as you mention yourself, it doesn't do much to differentiate itself from the iPod apart from changing external design. Perhaps you could base the whole 'marketing strategy' around this one aspect? You know, "it might be crap at everything else, but it looks awesome," and keep referencing this fact every couple of paragraphs. Could also concentrate on the wallpapers, perhaps. I like the "picture of a random hill" bit. --Hindleyite Talk 10:00, 29 April 2006 (UTC)

I added quite a bit and reworked a bit of it. How's that? --Jocke Pirat 13:05, 29 April 2006 (UTC)

Heh heh, I think this is starting to work now! You could try to be a bit more subtle rather than 'it is good', 'you will buy', but apart from that, good stuff emerging. Just needs some more expansion to make it more substantial. Celebrity endorsements, perhaps, or Bill Gates's big launch party? --Hindleyite Talk 17:14, 29 April 2006 (UTC)

I added some things, but I've got quite a bit of reworking to do with those sections--Jocke Pirat 19:08, 29 April 2006 (UTC)