Talk:Wag

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This article was nominated for deletion on November 5, 2008.
The result of the discussion was Keep.

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From Pee Review[edit]

Humour: 7 I enjoyed the twist on a real company and real people. It's very cleverly written. However, some of the later sections could be expanded; I feel like there's more humor that can be used in there.
Concept: 8 It's a clever idea with potential, and it's pretty original.
Prose and formatting: 4 You have an absolutely atrocious amount of Red Links in this article. Fix it!
Images: 2 You have one image, and it doesn't work. Add some images, they're out there, I know they are! An image of the logo, especially, would be good.
Miscellaneous: 7 I enjoy how you based this article in fact and simply twisted the facts to fit a world of canines.
Final Score: 28 The writing is very good, and this article has a lot of potential. However, there needs to be pictures; perhaps not of "nude dogs", but perhaps of Huffner, the logo, a joke cover, etc. You know what I mean; pictures that fit the humor of the article. Also, get rid of the red links; they're a huge distraction.
Reviewer: Judgement 15:30, 17 February 2007 (UTC)