Talk:Thumb twiddling
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Pee Review[edit]
Look at this awesome review the article got:
| Humour: | 4 | It had a few wry references, sure, but I didn't really find it funny. I think you could talk more about it as a serious martial art, and take a more exaggerated "being serious of something silly" stance. |
| Concept: | 5 | I don't think it provides you with much material to work with, but you've got an angle. I say you play it up more. |
| Prose and formatting: | 4 | Well written, but extremely short. Could you add more to current sections? Maybe a "health benefits" section? Rules of official thumb twiddling? Describe more about thumb twiddling? Just like a girlfriend, don't be afraid to give it more meat. |
| Images: | 4 | They are pictures of thumbs. Can you add, perhaps, pictures of famous martial artist's thumbs? |
| Miscellaneous: | 3 | Sorry man, but I felt I had to ding you somewhere for relying on lists/quotes/references to famous people as a humor tool. |
| Final Score: | 20 | Not bad, but not really good either. Give it another read through, tone it up a bit, I think we'll both be really pleased with the results. |
| Reviewer: | --Mejwell 20:30, 7 September 2007 (UTC) | |
--Kpmartin18 21:37, 7 September 2007 (UTC)