Talk:The Ultimate Weight Loss Solution
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From Pee Review:
| Humour: | 7 | I have two guidelines for you improving this article. More black humor, with more "accidents". And more ad-like language. |
| Concept: | 9 | Very good idea, work a little bit more and it's a pret-a-porter VFH. |
| Prose and formatting: | 7 | As I said before, season your article with more evil... |
| Images: | 5 | Remove the fat lady. It's cliché and disgusting. Find something original. And don't forget about the black humor. What about the product itself? Look for weird mean-looking machinery. Or maybe a simple butcher's cleaver. |
| Miscellaneous: | 10 | (Really, this section is useless). |
| Final Score: | 38 | Great potential, keep on working! |
| Reviewer: | herr doktor needsApistol  [scream!] 14:20, 13 April 2007 (UTC)
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