Talk:The Great Flood

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I've tried to make a piss take of the Noah's Ark story based on the details in the Bible. I'm hoping to show how ridiculous and self contradicting evry last detail of that moronic story is. I'm woried that there isn't enough of the daft humour that most people like though. Would it be possible to add some of that while still leaving the story faithful to the Biblical account? One last point: The Ark is a trademark! Weri long wang 14:19, 12 May 2007 (UTC)

Humour:	7	Wasn't actually expecting it to be that funny, to be honest. Lead could be improved on, but overall it's very good. There is a potential superscript joke that is ruined by the glossary, however.
Concept:	8	A new twist on an old topic. Very good concept.
Prose and formatting:	6	A couple of things let this down: The lead, and the videos. They do detract from the article somewhat.
Images:	5	Doesn't really add to the article. Needs another one, too, I reckon.
Miscellaneous:	10	-
Final Score:	36	A very good article in-the-making, just need to sort out the formatting, improve the lead and put a good image in there.
Reviewer:	–—Hv (talk) 12/05 19:29