Talk:Sephora
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| Humour: | 7 | I am not a girl or whore so I do not know about what Sephora is other than a body wash/ hormone filled shampoo formula. The logo and name remind me of the dry scalp conditioner Crew. That could be your next article ;) |
| Concept: | 7 | Havent seen many articles about the modern whore creating beauty products. Im sure I will find some articles like this for men like Old Spice. Try making a see also section. If not, this article is unique. |
| Prose and formatting: | 8 | I see no obvious spelling errors but I think the article would be more appealing if you aligned all images to one side like the right side. Also, try removing some of the red links. I believe there are too many. Finally, add more meat or typing to your article sections (more text) |
| Images: | 7 | The images are pretty good and revelent. Again, on the align to the right. Finally, perhaps you can add a final image that does not depict Sephora's bottle logo image thing like who are the average outsiders and who are the insiders. |
| Miscellaneous: | 7.5 | its 10:30 pm and im about to go to sleep. Im too tired (lazy) to get a calculator but since 1/3 = .3 im putting a 7.3. No wait! I think it should be rounded to 7.5. Like majic, it is now a 7.5 ,see?
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| Final Score: | 36.5 | Your article isnt bad. I just think it needs more writing. Overall with the solid concept it makes a sturdy frame of a skeleton that needs more meat. |
| Reviewer: | -- User:Mazman343405 | |
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