Talk:Rock band

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This is a short article I produce late at night I thank all contributors for their see also section. If you have any pics send them over, also write on it if you have talent and inspiration, make it funny. Please review this. --The triptophane

Humour:	4	Some of what you have is good, and I think it could be made even better if you expand the article. Some other things, however, such as self-references to the author, can probably go.
Concept:	8	The idea of an article about Rock bands in general is good, and has a lot of potential.
Prose and formatting:	3	Remember, there is such a thing as a subgroup; I suggest that you use it. Also, expand on the sections that your pictures belong in so the pictures fit, both size-wise and humor-wise. In addition, move some of the pictures so that the article is easier to read.
Images:	7	No real photoshopping, but appropriate pictures nonetheless. That last image caption, however, doesn't really fit the article; maybe if you expanded the "Guitar" section a bit it would.
Miscellaneous:	6	Your section on Garage Bands was probably the best one in the article.
Final Score:	28	It's a good idea, to be sure, but the execution is decidedly poor. However, this article still has potential. Expansion is key; make the article more in-depth, and it is almost guaranteed to become better.
Reviewer:	Judgement 15:03, 17 February 2007 (UTC)