Talk:Private Eye
Nice to see that pic going to some use...--Sycamore (Talk) 13:30, 12 February 2009 (UTC)
- Endless endless research.......I'm taking a nap!-- 13:40, 12 February 2009 (UTC)
I love the article so far. However, "The Surprise Ending" baffles me. I'm guessing it's just unfinished, but, like, WTF? Unsolicited conversation Extravagant beauty PEEING 03:45, 13 February 2009 (UTC)
- Just test chunks/ideas. The page started with a pile of disjointed ideas and metaphors and is in the process of "writing itself". Everything after ineffectual cop is wide open and everything before will be tweaked. The cliches and bizarre metaphors need to flow like combination punches or they'll sound listy.-- 10:06, 13 February 2009 (UTC)
I'm taking back ownership of the dialog if you are going to use it. Who knows, maybe an Unfilm is in the works - you can help (hint, hint). Still I have given you a ton of great stuff on this - even shot you the one about "The loudest thing that one can say is a whisper". Would like some feedback, Dame 
GUN PotY WotM 2xPotM 17xVFH VFP Poo PMS •YAP• 17:50, 18 February 2009 (UTC)
- It's great dialog and I was going to suggest you spin-off with it. Despite it not being used you've done some heavy contributions on this article and I consider it half yours if we hit a home run with it.-- 17:58, 18 February 2009 (UTC)
Nice stuff. -Sockpuppet of an unregistered user 17:53, 18 February 2009 (UTC)