Talk:Pavement (band)

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Hm, for fans of the band, perhaps..--Danny Himself 23:13, 6 January 2007 (UTC)

Humour:	1	I didn't get a single joke. I am of course assuming they were there to get.
Concept:	1	I've never heard of this band, so I assume Codeine's Mum hasn't either. I could of course be wrong, but obscure bands that nobody knows almost never work as good articles. Even the Beatles article isn't very funny, for crying out loud. You should probably just avoid these as subjects altogether, unless you find a brilliant angle (like the "Paul is dead" hoax, staying with the example from the Beatles).
Prose and formatting:	2	This had a lot of lists (a common problem with bands), but also had issues with the pictures messing up the formatting of the text in some places, I suggest moving the pictures around using preview to see if this problem can be remedied. The article is rather clean, however, aside from these major problems.
Images:	2	I was left in the dark, so if there was a joke to get, I didn't.
Miscellaneous:	1	Needs a {[wikipedia}} template, unless of course this band isn't at Wikipedia, in which case this would fail the Codeine's Mum test.
Final Score:	7	As I said in the "concept" section, band articles almost never work, and are usually deleted on sight as Codeine's Mum has never heard of them. My suggestion would be to pick another subject, unfortunately, unless, as I said before, you find a BRILLIANT angle that can actually be very funny on its own merit.
Reviewer:	--<<>> 23:35, 7 January 2007 (UTC)