I (Leatherboundbooks) accidentally forgot to sign in for my last two edits for some reason, here is proof: 76.190.157.0 19:35, 29 June 2007 (UTC)
Again, just to clarify: LeatherboundbooksTalkContributions 19:36, 29 June 2007 (UTC)
From Pee Review[edit]
Humour:
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8
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You started it pretty good, I loved the pirates' part and the squinting to look more important. You lost me a bit later on with the town of monocle and modern day use.
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Concept:
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9
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Nice.
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Prose and formatting:
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8
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Quite good, the pictures being placed at the odd ends makes it look a bit messy. But just a bit.
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Images:
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9
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Try and ask someone to chop a monocled pirate, but other than that it's cool
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Miscellaneous:
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9
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perhaps add a chapter of proper ways to wear a monocle?
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Final Score:
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43
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Nice bit, not too much work needed.
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Reviewer:
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~ 10:42, 2 August 2007 (UTC)
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