Talk:Lawrence the Cable Gent

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Humour:	6.5	Pretty good humor throughout, but there's a lot of room for expansion, especially regarding the "Lawrence the Cable Gent:Chimney Sweep" idea, which I think has potential for a little more than just two sentences at the end of the article. What you've got here is good, though.
Concept:	8	It's a good idea, and what is there so far is good too. Has some room for expansion, though, as I said before.
Prose and formatting:	9	No problems heeya
Images:	6	The first image is really good, the second one is more on the "meh" side. But it works well enough.
Miscellaneous:	8.9	hmm...can't think of anything miscellaneous to say here.
Final Score:	38.4	On the whole, 'tis an enjoyable article, though it's a little on the short side.
Reviewer:	--THE 17:21, 13 June 2007 (UTC)

I hope nobody minds that at the moment I'm working on a cleanup of the second image. Like THE, I found it rather....well quite frankly, crappy. I've just got a few edits left to make, I hope the author enjoys it when it's done. -RAHB 06:04, 27 July 2007 (UTC)

And it's done. -RAHB 07:20, 27 July 2007 (UTC)