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From Pee Review[edit]
| Humour: | 7 | Formidable start but needs some work |
| Concept: | 9 | good idea found it interesting |
| Prose and formatting: | 7 | nothing truly special |
| Images: | 8 | I loved the virus picture but i think ou should do some work on the others |
| Miscellaneous: | 7 | not much to say |
| Final Score: | 38 | Add more and try to build on the idea more because the initial idea was pretty funny |
| Reviewer: |  Weasel 3689 
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